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Missing their beloved

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It's a piece of fanart I did for a fanzine. The characters are from a Chinese RPG game.

The two women married the same guy, but one ran away from home because she couldn't stand the rigour of her parents in law. Her husband fell ill seriously soon after she left, so his parents arranged a second marrige for him, hoping to bring happiness into the household, yet it didn't prevent the young man's death. His second wife made away her own life shortly after.

The blueish women is the second wife called Jiang Shi. I intended to creat a transparent feeling for she's now a ghost :( but that is too much for me. After all, drawing is just my avocation.

i might make some minor changes on the face later since the expression isn't good enough.

critics are welcomed~
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rababco's avatar
Wow, you're amazing artist! Just as a suggestion since you wanted to change this, maybe you should try having lines in the picture to make it appear more transparent/translucent. For example you can keep the lines of the clothing visible through her hands/arms so it doesn't look so solid. Also the background can show through her body and arms as well. Also, you can try making her body less clean cut and more fluid and whisp like. I don't know you had in mind in terms of facial expressions but maybe try a more angished/depressed expression to show the pain in her face.